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Pokemon with Paul Blart

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A new series of mine featuring Paul blart and Jon Stewart.

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Yeeeeeah...

I tend to agree with what other people are saying. I think you've got a decent idea, but it's not really being executed well. The sound quality isn't that great, and... well, I could just reiterate what others have said.

Something I found personally a little off was the voices sound nothing like the intended characters. I realize that doing a spot-on Jon Stewart impression isn't something to be expected, but as there was nothing in this video that required them to be Jon Stewart and Paul Blart, why not just make original characters?

Either way, a solid effort and sound idea.

I mean... Really?

The idea is not *terrible*, but the flash itself is poorly animated, poorly thought out, and poorly voiced.
Here are some tips:
- Actually draw your background/characters (newgrounds appreciates effort)
- Get a new mic. Definitely. And new voice actors.
- Spend some time thinking about jokes, you've got a good idea.

Good idea, but.....

....the execution of it isn't all that great. I don't know if the voice acting is intended to be that way, but it's isn't a pleasant thing to hear. Maybe it should be turned into a toon, and not done with the still pictures, they don't really seem to flow well. I like the idea, and I think it would be funny, but like this, it just doesn't feel like it'll work. The flow of it should feel natural, but this almost feels like it was put together in like 5 minutes. Or maybe it's just not my kind of humor, but visually, it could use a face lift. Keep the idea going though, and work on it, because you could make a great series out of it.

Just... meh

Not found very entertaining, and could use a bit of improvement, especially with sound quality. Voice acting was mediocre at best, though again your sound was a little off, but cheer up, I don't know how to do this sort of stuff O.o atleast not very well.