Yeeeeeah...
I tend to agree with what other people are saying. I think you've got a decent idea, but it's not really being executed well. The sound quality isn't that great, and... well, I could just reiterate what others have said.
Something I found personally a little off was the voices sound nothing like the intended characters. I realize that doing a spot-on Jon Stewart impression isn't something to be expected, but as there was nothing in this video that required them to be Jon Stewart and Paul Blart, why not just make original characters?
Either way, a solid effort and sound idea.