Very good!

Like the previous reviews, the intro was a bit long, but I can see you were sticking with the soundtrack, so that is understandable (perhaps try more transitional stuff next time to keep things going while waiting for the ques from the music).

I had no issues watching it and the artwork was pretty good. On the first scene, the arm to shoulder connection could use some tweaking, but once zoomed out, it was no longer an issue (close ups, yea they are devious little guys aren't they?).

The plot was great and even though the movie ended quickly, it still held the main idea fully and stays on topic.

In the end, fix the transitions and fix the shoulder issue (or you can leave it be, it's only the one scene that the issue is at) and you are the owner of a great flash movie. Even with those issues, it's still great! Keep it up!

not bad not bad at all it's better then does crap

flash videos.so yeah it's pretty decent but you have to work more,and the intro was 2 long.so keep working and watch animated show on tv so you can learn a few thing's.
ps:i love the easter egg

i loled! :D

dont know what emanhattan is wining about but it played perfectly on my pc (wich is not crappy)

no explosion this time... :(
but lazers :D!!!!!

and what is the song in the end? love it

Erratic framerate AAAA

I have no idea how you did it but you somehow found a way to fuck up the framerate in flash without making a cartoon that is graphically intense.

what is going on in your fla. file?

I practically couldnt see your cartoon. I opened it up in different ways to make sure it wasnt just my computer (wich is pretty crappy, but can perfectly play flash cartoons) but nothing worked.

The only thing I remember from the whole thing are the oddly looking characters, the tweens in their bodies that magically make flash go insanely slow, the grocery store that looks suspiciously traced over theKwikie mart
(proof:http://dc.metblogs.com/archive s/images/2007/07/300px-Kwik-e-mart.jp g)
and finally, what I believe was a dumb lazer joke at the end, wich didnt play properly anyway because, again, the framerate was fucked beyond repair).

I really wish I could help you but I have never seen anyone mess up that way.

My closest guess is that you are using an outdated version of flash. I dunno

sorry :(

Needs work but not too bad

The intro seems a little long and you need more development in the beggining but it seems you wanted it like that.