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Hit The Road Jack

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My first flash ever! my teacher is great but i didn't bother to listen to him. I smoke alot of weed and tend to do what i want in class so i had to learn everything by myself. i got 100% for this peice of shit and i put about 2 hours into the whole thing(Most of the time with audio troubles). And i wanna hear what you think about this flying fecal torpedo. Thank you for wasting your time =]

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You've gotta' understand the humour of this short.

OK, so the animation isn't that good but you must appreciate that he bothered to do a background (lots of new submissions don't have then). The song really suited this fat bitch.

The vending machine in a grassy plain where a fat bitch lay is rather bizarre but you could really understand at what sort of humour you're trying to get at.

You see, we're both in the same boat. I can only really do this sort of Flash, difference is I'm never going to submit them.

I really understand what you're trying to do - just sort of a spammy-jokey kind of thing. Try doing this again but with with more.. quality? Just make something better (not trying to say it in a bad way).

Keep it up, man!

it's ok

i can seee you put "alot" of time into it. theres enough animation but it is good enough? Simple answer: No.
The music is fine and comes through clearly, the music sometimes blocks some of the actual sound effects though. The animation and general drawings could be ALOT better and i mean ALOT.
Just work longer on pieces and don't rush through them.

Needs work.

I agree with trigunwolfwood- The music was good, and worked well with the animation, but you need to work on your animation skills a bit more.

word

That was funny when you shape tweened a nickel into a 2 dollar bill, which wouldn't work in a vending machine anyway, especially not one that's sitting in the middle of a grassy plain not hooked up to anything. And the Bob Saget Manticore/Jet was priceless.

sorry friend

While I like your choice of music, I believe you need a little more practice with flash, but keep working on it and im sure u will improve
Love and Peace

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Nov 14, 2010
12:06 AM EST