Pretty good.

Short and brief, but rather interesting. And RevannTheSamurai, this is an animation, not a flash game.

You've got what it takes

I think the animation was pretty cool, but your ideas seemed really disconnected. But since this is your first animation, I'll give you a six.

I think you should spend more time on these, because you've got really good ideas.

It's a start.

You seem to have some talent with working with flash. Now, as that other guy said take your time and ask yourself if it really is worth posting. If you take your time (It can take weeks to months to years) you can make a really quality flash animation. Put lots of thought into your submissions. The animations you make when you are board can be a start for a project. If you ever are board again start making a flash, but don't call it finished yet. Take time after that to improve upon it and really make it shine. Don't worry, you'll do great!

Yeah

I liked it. Creative guy hahah

dont make flash when your bored.

The purpose to make a flash is when you feel a fire in your belly when making it, feel inspired basically. When you make a flash out of boredom, It can tend to be a very sloppy, truck-on-ice disaster. Before posting on newgrounds, think to yourself, Is this flash good enough for the community? Is it worth posting? If you answer no to either one or both, don't post. It will save you from a lot of mean words from the community. Next time around, try and take your time when making a creation, think things through, and most of all, don't rush. Another thing is that the flash portal is not for test animations, its for full completed content. One more thing, be original, that will please most people here. Have a good day.