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Pretty good.

Short and brief, but rather interesting. And RevannTheSamurai, this is an animation, not a flash game.

You've got what it takes

I think the animation was pretty cool, but your ideas seemed really disconnected. But since this is your first animation, I'll give you a six.

I think you should spend more time on these, because you've got really good ideas.

It's a start.

You seem to have some talent with working with flash. Now, as that other guy said take your time and ask yourself if it really is worth posting. If you take your time (It can take weeks to months to years) you can make a really quality flash animation. Put lots of thought into your submissions. The animations you make when you are board can be a start for a project. If you ever are board again start making a flash, but don't call it finished yet. Take time after that to improve upon it and really make it shine. Don't worry, you'll do great!

Yeah

I liked it. Creative guy hahah