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This is my website intro. I need honest opinions, NOT assholes.

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not bad but more happening on the page would be fu

not bad but if the numbers moved with the music it would make it more interesting to look at

Hmmm

One thing I would like to know is: how can this portal entry be up for so long and be so neglected? It's been months and months and it isn't even up to 100 votes yet. Anyways... it was alright, i liked the Oakenfold. It needs to be a little more fast paced. I agree with most of the previous reviewer in a lot of aspects so I don't need to restate it.

Good, but make a few minor changes...

For example, make the pace of the foreground with the (white) text move faster, I almost wrote a rewiew a few times expecting one part to be the end, only to have another part come up.

Also, try to make it snappier. Techno like this has two feels; one is a upbeat feel that defines techno. the other is a deeper, more enigmatic feel, which although fits the move of this piece, doesn't capture the stereotype of a hacker: in and out quick, keys clacking away to get to the innermost parts to siphon data before the 6-million dollar backwashing computer program captures you.

Other than that, this is pretty elegant, even though it is trite in it's reminiscent feel of the matrix. you may want to reconcept it (perhaps with the color) to avoid such a cliche.

Credits & Info

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1,305
Votes
4
Score
4.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 28, 2002
7:52 PM EDT