Pretty good

Animation was fine, the preloader was excellent.

My complaints are the sound and the lame dialogue.

I don't know if you don't speak english fluently or not, but I couldn't understand you sometimes. The static in the microphone didn't help, but maybe you should look for a voice actor.

The dialogue was lame. Plain lame. Come up with a better idea, and improve the sound, and you'll get a higher score.

I liked it

I liked it but I think you should elaborate on it, it could be great.

not bad for a first flash.

Even though the animation was bad, i still believe you can excel far in making videos. Don't worry.

light conversation

+ drawn
- depressive guy is hard to hear
+ pun
- but the pun really didn't land for me.

Good first try

for your first subbmsiion it pretty good ^_^