You did... something.
looks like you've worked on it. Art needs improvement. The crappy flashing writing is no good. Nix that...
Alright plot idea, acting could use work, but a fair attempt. Much room for improvement, but keep it up.
Author Comments
The Demon Businessman discovers the perfect bait.
I actually tired on this one!~! a bit kinda
i mean it has a script and voice acting and a punchline thats more than anything else ive done has had
Chaoslithium responds:
your FACE needs improvement 8)
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