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Pumpkin Dissection

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Did this for 2D production class in a week. Had to be 3 shots and the character had to pick up fruit. I didn't want him to pick up fruit so I gave him a pumpkin. It's a bit late for Halloween but I wanted to submit it anyways. Anyways, ENJOY!

EDIT: btw, this doesn't have a preloader and a stop. So it loops. >_> sorry!

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Nicely animated

Definitely needs a preloader, but it didn't hurt the flash or anything.

I think it just ended too abruptly though, since I was expecting something more at the end than the way you ended it.

Overall a good flash and smooth animating.

I liked the art style...

it's just a few things seemed missing. when he is carving up the pumpkin there should be a cutting or dicing sound. not just blank audio. also, some of the sounds seemed delayed (like when he picked up the pumpkin and set it down) plus there was basically no ending either.

I like it but

I really like the animation and art style, but it just seems like it's 30% of an animation that's not been finished, so can only really give 30% of a score.

i like this flash

i really do, i just hate the ending.... wtf? where thay do that at????

kinda short

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well i wont lie this was very cute and i got a good laugh out of it, it was kinda short, the pumnkin idea was neat but thios could have been slightly better if abit longer and showing that the kid did get to cut it, also your flash {LOOPS} you may want to add a stop action code at the start of your {TIMELINE} so it doesnt loop, and if your gonna have short flashes why not add a number of short ones and put them in here so that its not so short just an idea though, anyways good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well a few things could really be worked on, first off adding a stop action code, adding more to the story, and or adding other short animations to go with.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit on the short side but still cute, i enjoyed it.
~X~

Mukki responds:

(: Thanks! I'm not sure how to put a preloader in so if I ever do learn, i'll make sure add it in this one and other future submissions.

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Score
3.39 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 7, 2010
9:54 PM EST