It was ME!

I guess my voice acting messed it up. we edited my voice in garage band to make it sound like a scanner or something. i'm actually a 20 year old MALE haha. i think my friend worked really hard on this and i hate to see him penalized for my mistakes.

Nearly

I think your voice acting, the quality of the voice recording as well as the fact that you sounded extremely camp, let it down. Along with the fact that it sounded like you tried to make it up on your feet instead of using a script. It nearly worked.

i like it

the "scannin voice" got kinda annoyin after about 1 min.. lol

short but lengthy

At first i thought this was going to be something really cool, but the graphics where a little rough, and the scanning joke took a little too long not to mention that i really disliked the voice actress you used for this.