Maybe,

Put some more work inot it and fix up the sound, and i think it might have potential

Looks hilarious

But there was something seriously wrong with the sound on the one I watched. Hope you can fix that on the re-upload. Nice animation though.

okay

im taking in the overall "Idea" and "story" for your mark...

I in fact kinda liked it, although ive seen it before, and i wont Blam it because i believe in potential... saying that... there is a lot that this needs, and although this is your fist submission i don't think thats a good enough excuse for a missing sound file... Good luck in the future though

Is there supposed to be sound?

Maybe it's just a glitch in my system, but there wasn't any sound. Silent toons are okay, but it looked like we were supposed to be hearing stuff. If it's just me, then never mind. :-)

ehhh

it seems like things could be interesting, but without sound its hard to really care. Im sorry for being harsh but its true. try it with sound and maybe itll be better.