A bit loud but good job

Has Some Potential But Needs Polishing

This animation could be pretty good in the final version. However, there are going to be some things that you need to before its done. The big one is to seriously up the frame rate. The animations will be much smoother once you raise it up. Another thing I would suggest would be to add some background music or noise when the animation starts playing. This will give it a more engaging feel to it. I hope to see the final result be good.

Mmm

Ok so it wasn't as good as the first one. Do you have your Fps to higher then 12? You need to. You might need to re-do this with a higher fps.

hope you make a full

Slloooww Mottiiooonnn

Good overall, but HORRIBLE screen movement. I thought it was my computer for a second, but its just the bad movement. Improve on that, next time.