I think this could have been the reboot!!!

Looks way better than the reboot

That's messed up

killing children with their temptations

but otherwise its ok i guess, could have done more.

Looks like you know how to use Flash pretty well.

That fact alone escalates you above about half of the Newgrounds community.

You know how to draw, and animate. This is really good, but that alone won't get you very far.

I took off points for originality because, well, it's It. If you had come up with the idea yourself, you'd probably have a 5 for a score.

Here's a tip: next time you have an idea, get yourself some voice actors, and maybe another artist. Work together, and create something awesome.

But for the time being, this is okay. For a start.

But I want to see bigger and better things from you.

scary....

not so bad, this music always freaks me out,. i think that you should clean up the art work a bit and the words too, but other than that... it's pretty decent