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SuperHero and the Zombies

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EDIT: Wait, Halloween collection? Haha, What? Thanks?

"Bob (2 nominations) and Gwen (2 nominations) go to the park and run into the Copy Cat. The copy cat makes a copy of Gwen and a copy of Bob. Jeremy comes to the park and sees them, he know he has to kill the fake ones, but if he makes the wrong choice he could kill Gwen or Bob. Meanwhile Isabella, Myles and Sam go trick or treating and run into zombies. The zombies are dead bodies that had been brought back to life by the meteor rock. In the end Jeremy makes the right two choices and kills the clones. Isabella, Myles and Sam all team together and stop all of the zombies. No one was killed."

Hi, this series is about a guy called bob who is a super hero, also watch the previous episodes on youtube (there is a link on the title page) otherwise this will make no sense.

also i am only 12 so please tell me how i can improve, as i know im not that great!

Also, sorry about the low quality, i had to compress it enough to go on newgrounds

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Dude, seriously, you said you are asking for critique on how to improve. The people below have told you to improve on your animation skills and you're spitting it right back in their faces. But really - you DO need to improve your art skills a serious amount before it could qualify as a well made flash. I'm no Flash expert, but I've seen ALOT better, and you should know yourself everything you need to work on. Also, not only is there no voice acting - which isn't terrible, there have been flashes before with no voice acting - but theres no sound..AT ALL. No music, no sound effects - nothing. And yes, you do still need to work on fps. Everything in this flash - although moving fluidly, still moves incredibly slow. But the main gripe here is with the artwork overall. These are just match stick people. Whats going on with that pregnant womans arms at the start, for example - they just seem to drift away from her body before returning to their original place. If your characters had literal meat on their bones, then we might actually understand what they are doing. Seriously - this looks very unprofessional and very unworthy to be posted - you're obviously only beginning to use Flash. Come on - give it a few years of practice. And take my advice seriously, you won't get far if you are just going to post silent match stick animations.

superheroanimations responds:

"And yes, you do still need to work on fps." what do you mean, work on fps? the fps can be set and tada. 25 fps is good to work with. fps has nothing to do with how fast they move.

"Whats going on with that pregnant womans arms at the start, for example - they just seem to drift away from her body before returning to their original place." Sorry that was just some weird glitch when I exported it.

thanks for the feedback, atleast you were "nice" when you reviewed, its only because he was so blunt in his review "this is crap seriously" thats why I called him a douche.

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2.61 / 5.00

Oct 31, 2010
3:48 PM EDT