Oh man, these were so hilarious! :D
Author Comments
Hey everyone!
I am currently studying Multimedia at the University of Pretoria. We were asked to make a short webtoon for our end project. This is my project and I would appreciate it if you would watch and rate my toon.
Please try not to be mean as we all have to start somewhere.
Thank you
Mzi (QueenPenny)
He he. funny voices :]
The arm movements could be worked on, made to look abit more natural. Look at your own arms as reference when talking.
Personally i find using black outlines makes it look abit untidy and distracting, try using a different colour or no lines at all. Concept is current and interesting.
Well Done on the Voices!
Animation in South Africa - Keep practicing and you will get better at it.
Form - Movement - Composition.
QueenPenny responds:
Hey thank you very much for your comment! I will definitely try to improve for future works!
:)
Nice job
You made me laughed, this was fun !
QueenPenny responds:
Thanks man high 5!!! :D :D
I know, it's just a beggining
but i think you'll have to work on the atmosphere, on the background, on the story and on the animation to get trough your University programe...
Nice you understood the use of tween motion, but if your drawing is not clean, it won't be nice, even if it's kind of fluid.
Also, your other major point is to put some music in your movie. If the story is more about the dialogues, put some low music in background just to create an atmosphere. Otherwise, it sounds empty.
Work hard and submit your next animation. Maybe you'll get nice reviews.
QueenPenny responds:
Hey !
As a beginner to animating I really do admire your comments as they will help me in future submissions. I will definitely try to clean up my drawing a bit and improve on the other factors you mentioned.
Thank you very much for commenting.