Sweet
Dit was nogals goed. Ek het dit baie geniet. Baie goeie werk!
Author Comments
Created and Animated by Tinette Nolan, Vocal Recordings by Joshua Ball. This is my first animation as a student using Flash. Please leave your comments, I'm pretty amped to hear :D
Dis moer awesome!!!
Dis sover my favourite!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME :D:D:D:D
tinettenolan responds:
fank choo
Need to work on animating, but good.
I actually really enjoyed this, but it was more down to the choice of music than the animation style itself. The music used really gave it a strange artistic feel, which meant I could look over the relatively poor drawing and limited animation. Sound effects were also excellent, and I thought the quirky story fitted the music well.
The areas to improve on are fairly obvious then- you need to work on your drawing skills, and in particular you need to keep practising with animation- most of what was here was simply an object moving from side to side- it would be nice to see something a bit more advanced next time.
Still, entertaining enough, and showing plenty of potential.
tinettenolan responds:
Great, thanx :D plenty of hours still to be put in and improvement is to come :) Im a first year student and still novice to it all, but watch this space :) will spend some time on developing intricacies and detail.
Funny but lacking
Well.. I guess it's not too bad. I thought the voice talent and the effects were pretty funny which saved you I think. The animation needs a lot of work as well as the artwork.
tinettenolan responds:
Thanx, yeah, Im still working on developing my drawing and animation style. It took a majority of the time getting use to the flash interface and for some odd reason my bone structures kept on freaking out? awkward perhaps?
