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My submission for my IMY 120 project. I hope you enjoy it.

We submit our projects to newgrounds in order to get bonus marks a.k.a the average vote at the end of the week gets added to our score.

I realize that the story can be random and confusing, but that was kind of the point.
And the sound is pretty abisimal... that was not intentional, but due to time constraints.

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Need to work on sounds, but animation is nice

Positives:

The animation and drawing style was rough, but quite well done despite that. It was nice and consistent, and there were no obviously lazy drawings that I could see, while some parts had some nice shadows and good shading.

It was paced pretty well, and as such was entertaining. Had it been slower it would have gotten boring fast, but the rapid fire style of it worked well.

Negatives:

As you say yourself, sound effects were poor throughout. This could have been masked, however, had you used some appropriate music to play over the top. There are plenty of excellent examples right here on Newgrounds in the audio portal if you ever need music for an animation, and it makes an enormous difference.

It would have been nice to have some voice acting rather than speech bubbles, especially as the speech bubble pacing was a touch fast, making reading them all a bit more challenging than it should have been- doable, but a rush.

Otherwise it is a case of refinement rather than all out change- it is always impossible to get better at drawing and animating, so long as the basics are there.

A good effort though, worthy of a pass and a semi-decent score.

randomdude12 responds:

thanks alot for the review. I'm glad you liked it, mostly.
I originally wanted to use voice acting, but my voice ends up inaudible for some reason. My friend was going to do it, but he decided to go work at his uncle's hotel.

I'll definitly do better on the audio for all future submissions.

Thanks agian