It does look dated
This was a mediocre submission, but I can praise you for getting such a high score. What was weird was that Yoink appeared to be DickNeck in this. Then again, this was made in 2004.... My gosh! You predicted the creation of DickNeck! You weren't kidding when you said this was a documentary that shook America, the original DickNeck should check this thing out. It could have had a lot better animation, though.
Speaking of internet memes, Yoink reminded me also of the Slender Man in this. It was pretty satisfying to see him get shot like that. There could have also been some more action, but it was interesting to show that side of the forums, which I don't really understand. Will there perhaps be a sequel given the hook at the end? You might want to submit that one as soon as you can.