your voice is awesome..
Like you told us in your commentary, this part lacks a bit on action, which makes it a bit - but really just a bit! - boring to watch.
Nonetheless, this is a funny movie. Artwork and voice-over (sound in general, in fact) are very good, also the storytelling is interesting.
All in all, a very promising start, just a bit slow-paced, but I guess Part 2 will really rock the house! Keep up the good work, man!
not too shabby
one tip though, stop breathing into the mike so often, you can hear it crackle and it really breaks the flow of the cartoon.
i loved it
lol really funny
I prefer frame by frame, but this was really solid stuff. Great story, and good art.
I will definately come back for part two. Keep me posted man.