Good for an 11 year old
I won't blam it, but try adding either music or voices. Also, put the others on Newgrounds.
also, i did put some of the others on newgrounds, but they got blammed, so now im just gonna be uploading series 5.
This is really surprising, based on the fact that you have a youtube account AND a newgrounds acount at the age of 11, but I have a couple of things to say that I noticed in the animation.
1.The animation looked crude, like a rough draft.
2.This was made in a mix of microsoft word, and paint.
3.The word bubbles stuck there for an akward amount of time, then dissapeared.
4.The characters moved sometimes rather akwardly, and some of the plot came too fast, like, "Will you marry me,"
Otherwise, your animation was well done. 4 stars for you.
thanks for the constructive criticism.