Why beg to avoid a blam?
This submission seems to have enough to stand on its own. The fact you put some effort into putting in some decent artwork and a bit of animation (even though it was mostly tweens) shows that you actually tried to make something worth the time.
What made this movie bland though was the fact there was no real twist, it just a redone version of a announcement. Thats just my guess though, if it was original, I take this statement back.
However, with content aside, this movies acceptable. If you improve on your animation and learn to work outside of tweening. I bet you'll do a lot better, keep in mind though that theres more to making movies then just profiting from ads.