wow i am you second review
sorry man but a got too rate this a 3 and vote a 2.the writing is not so good but the consept is awsome, and the animation suck but it doesn't suck too much(helpful info for the animation:try hand draw animation or is you want to say with the puppet style try watching other cartoons on tv and try to make ther movement of the body more realistic,and to help you give this,filme your self and try to copy the movement of the body).ok i hope this is useful for you and try to learn the human figure more,take live drawing drawing classes go to art school if you want.bye ;) i hope really hope that i helpd you
will not lie, I agree with you 100%. the next episode will have alot better art, and writing. This one lost its steam almost from the get-go, but things are looking up for the future. Thank you for your honest review, and i will take what you have said into consideration.
Needs better writers...
While it was pretty decent the joke were pretty bland... so was there delivery.
The Voice Acting was pretty bad, no real emotion.
But on the plus side I liked that preloader.
I will admit...after seeing this in animated form. I realized this wasnt as funny as I had hoped. But since this i have gotten alot better at comedy writing, so from here on out it will be 100% better. And the preloader is thanks to Sam