The idea's fine, but you need to zoom the camera out. It's almost impossible to avoid guards when you don't know they exist until they're two feet away; I was constantly running directly into them because the camera wasn't wide enough to show them. At least keep the camera centered on Joe, so that you can easily see what's happening on all sides.
i liked it
yea some things a littel off but still good liked the story u should make part two were he gts sent to far back in time and runs from dinos cave men u know if can fix those problems and make it were u could throw out traps or fight the gards it would be off chain just don ive up on it