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...My First Flash Game...

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This is my first game! i know it has alot off bugs and looks like crap. but Anyways.. Enjoy my game! and i would very must like some contruktive comments and not just some reviews where people just tell me to get a life :O or sumting like that.

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good game to be your first one!

THIS IS REALLY GOOD ACTUALLY! well, i just started making games in flash. I know it is is kinda "test. I am going to rate you 5 guz this is awesome game to be your first one. And i dont want that it is blammed so soon...

Friends

I know it's your first, but maybe wait longer before attempting something. The use of the mouse was confusing, and the flash used messed with my computer, as in my mouse only shows up with the game and slowed my CPU down a bit. Maybe try to find some people who will help you with the actual process of making a game, it never hurts.

more of a learning experience than a game

not bad for a first flash but far far faaar from good, if you make that ball into a person sprite, add some enemies, better obstacles, story, weapons then you got yourself a sidescroller till then hope you learned a thing or two about flash in the prosses in all this

I've beaten the game...

And it's pretty good for the first flash game, not bad at all. But you need to make the jumping a little better and make some pretty nice graphics, as the first door you pass through it's more like you're passing behind it. I noticed that the ball graphics change from the middle of the game to the end of it, and it doesn't have any music.

The game is pretty cool though, you're going in the right path, if you work really hard and learn new things, I bet that you will makle excellent games.

Looking foward to the progress ;)

Its a start...

Everybody starts somewhere, dont worry if you get low scores, once you get better and start to add extras (Music!!!) you just might someday get a "WOOT!!! ALL MY 5 R BELONG TO THIS!".

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Score
3.19 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 1, 2010
10:48 AM EDT