I honestly don't know what to think.
This game has some good and bad points.
For one thing, it seems like after it loads, you're just kinda thrown into the game. Also, the loop desyncs after a while of playing, which sounds bad. The game is pretty weird, which isn't necessarily bad, but it also looks kinda bad, which doesn't do it any justice.
On the other hand, the idea behind it is interesting, and the plot, which you have put in the description, made me laugh a little.
Taking the good with the bad, if you improved the art, fixed the looping problem, and perhaps added an opening menu at least, then this might have been better. However, I understand this is your first project, so I know that you're still learning how to use everything. Practice at it a little, and you'll make something that gets a better score.