The poem Itself I suppose was good I'm not a poet so I wouldnt know, but It just doesnt match when you put it in flash, because there was really no purpose to it, there are other websites that you can post up your poem and that would be the place to do it not here good job though
It was good but EVERYTHING HAS A FUCKEN SOUND TO IT IF YOU KNEW HOW TO LISTEN YOU WOULD KNOW THAT SHIT YOU STUPID FUCKERS.
I love it and i have a small request could you some thing with a poem of mine
Do you hear that sound? that consatn claning sound! its the sound of death coming for you. truth be told thair are more sounds like the muzzle flash of a gun firing at point blank range aimed at your face or the sound of a knife slowly sliceing your thorth, the sound of a bomb going off,the sound of a leaky gas line,the sound of a car enigne,the sound of a buzz saw.or the sound of your own screems form the nightmares wich causes your brain to shut down. or again the sound of your owns sceerms as someone chokes you to death with their cold bare hands.so every one hears two sounds of death the sound of the cause and the sound of their own heart beat stop. please respond
dude that was ausome great piece of work u really brought feeling to the poem and brought it out to its full extent i believe that even someons who dosnt like poetry would love ur guys' work keep it up and is u want to there is a poetry contest at www.poeticpower.com and www.poetry.com if u enter good luck to u and keep up the good work
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Sound = 0 (hahah cuz its silent...nevermind)
Hahah that was tight! Meaningful? I think so...
but i cant tell.