it was ok.
It could have used a little music. Maybe some "ah, just walkin' in the park" kinda music.
But this is an excellent example of what you can do with under 100kb. If it were a bit more ... punchy, it would have rated better on style. In fact, even if your graphics were the same quality but you added more "oomph" to the production, enough to push it to Style 7 or 8, then it would have been worth a better overall grade.