I suppose it's ok.
It's good and works without bugs, but the smileys move way to fast and you need to add a winning score or an end to game somehow. But overall its decent.
Author Comments
From now on, when you finish this game, you get special surprise. Quick, finish my game to see what it is !!!
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This game is pretty simple in itself, but actually PLAYING it is another thing. There is some bugs with the cursor i added, so if anyone knows how to get rid of the lag, please tell me about it. Thanks you all so much for reviewing. I luv you newgrounds ^3^
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I just updated the game with a new cursor. It's cool, I think...
The update is finally done!!! Enjoy :P
I added some things that you might like: a hits limit, so at 10 it stops. When you get 10, a window appears, challenging you for more. Then, when you get 15, another window, asking for 20. When you finally get 20, you become champ, and gives you a password to send me. Also, I slowed down the smileys, for the game's benefits. I am adding something special with the orange smiley, you will see. Hope you will enjoy this new version.
If you have ideas, please post them in the review ^.^
This is the second game I post on Newgrounds, as my first got destroyed pretty harshly. This is just the beggining, and I will update this frequently. Please leave comments, and have fun ;)
tatacom responds:
thanks for that idea, i just added it, so, enjoy.
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It's decent, but the smilies go too fast, and sometimes they go under the "Back" button...
Slow Down!
the faces go so fast its impossible, the scoring system needs work, there should be a background of some sort, an end to the game i.e. ten points or one minute. This game is ill-conceived and is lacking in most area's.
My advice is watch the flash tutorials that interest you, model a game on those, and take your time. Good luck on future projects.
Unsatisfying!
Very basic, not addictive, and the smileys go by way too fast. You said you would update this game a lot? If you're going to make that promise, I'll give this game a vote of 2, so that it won't get blammed. I may come back later to give it higher votes. Things you need to work on:
- Make the smilies come by just a little more slowly, because it's impossible to catch up to them. This is because they appear in random places: to react to the smilies appearing you need -extra- response time to actually see them. And after that, you need the regular response time to move your mouse to the faces. Then, you need to press your mouse button. And you only get a split second to do all that.
- Well, I'm actually out of ideas: you can go so many ways with this concept!
Listen, I do know this is your second flash and all, but it just isn't really portal-worthy. I decided to give it a 'save' vote because you can make it into so much more! My tip: get some practice on Flash, and try to make a great third flash to surprise me! Make it count! Or, try to update this so that it becomes an awesome flash! I know I'm asking much, but you can do it if you get enough practice! Add Powerups! Levels! Difficulty Levels! You can do anything!
tatacom responds:
thanks alot for this helpful review, I will get to work right now ;).
It may look like i just started, but i have been using flash for almost 3 years now. i'm just learning so slowly :o. Anyway, thanks for your advices!
to hard man
good idea music and picturs but its just to hard man
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