Looks and sounds good, but the humor is way off. The Monty Python bit where the people fall past the window is roughly 35 years old now. The rest is just randomly assembled junk. Pretzels in heaven? OMG its so RANDOM and ZANY it just HAS to be funny, right? Wrong. You can do better than this. Focus your talent towards a well written story next time and you'll deserve your front page spot.
pretzels go heaven?! lol
When he's jumping, the News screen where it says "LIVE"... "OH SHIT This doens't look good" and then the journalist's face had me Lol so hard xD.
Well done, had me laughing. The whole "Looks like Jim finally did it" bit was hilarious, that was my favorite part. Hope you did well on your final!
the end saved it
animation was good but as mentioned before the monthy python office building joke is just stolen and not one of your creation but the pretzel souls were just hilarious
so 9 for animtion
5 for the jokes
Eh monty python joke
The out of the office building window joke done by monty python ruined the short for me : \ Classic when they do it, a rehash is just lame.
Honestly I don't know why everyone keeps claiming its a Monty Python joke, it's a pretty basic joke formula and not even they were the first to do it... Almost dumbfounding to see so many people say it. It feels like because one person said it, everyone else has to parrot it.