Not bad

Better then my first attempt.
Yet I agree with the click space thing, and the graphics +sound
Okay, you still need a lot of work, yet for a start, pretty good.
Hope you come out with better versions (no offense) soon
:)

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since it's your first game ill say it's not bad, it just needs some work. once you get better you can make this a game more popular than the original mario bros in the 1980's. (ps. that's good.)
(btw quick tip: the area's your supposed to click are too small, make it about a 1.5-2 cm distance around the area you are supposed to click, so if its a 2 cm object, make the click box slightly bigger.)

I've got this great idea for a game!

I'm going to place a key on the ground in a giant park and I want you to find it. Does that sounds like fun? Neither is clicking randomly on a screen for the one pixel that will advance the game.

Not bad

If you keep practicing I really think your gonna get somewhere with this. I love the idea behind it. I just recommend spending some more time on the graphics and sound.