Better then my first attempt.
Yet I agree with the click space thing, and the graphics +sound
Okay, you still need a lot of work, yet for a start, pretty good.
Hope you come out with better versions (no offense) soon
since it's your first game ill say it's not bad, it just needs some work. once you get better you can make this a game more popular than the original mario bros in the 1980's. (ps. that's good.)
(btw quick tip: the area's your supposed to click are too small, make it about a 1.5-2 cm distance around the area you are supposed to click, so if its a 2 cm object, make the click box slightly bigger.)
I've got this great idea for a game!
I'm going to place a key on the ground in a giant park and I want you to find it. Does that sounds like fun? Neither is clicking randomly on a screen for the one pixel that will advance the game.
If you keep practicing I really think your gonna get somewhere with this. I love the idea behind it. I just recommend spending some more time on the graphics and sound.