This game is better than Skyrim
I'm dead serious. I pirated that piece of shit to see what all the fuss was about and didn't smile for one boring hour.
The ending to this made me giggle for like a minute.
This game - 1, Skyrim - 0

The game needs better graphics, a story, and too be much longer.

hm...

Just being your first game shouldn't be reason enough tu put this on the net. When you make a game, and if you think the game is actually something good and playable, give it to your friends to test it out. Get some feedback from there, because if you just post useless crap, you won't get any specific feedback, just the usual: "better graphics" or "you suck".
Personally, what i really like in RPGs is the storyline. Of course, the graphics do matter, and the gameplay does too, but those 2 without a good storyline would just give a strategy game, or something like that.
Try harder, make more games, before you actually post them. And, if you eventually become famous through your flashes, then you can make a collection of crappy games that you did when you started off . :p

4 hours? really now....

It's a very nice first try, but dude, it's still a bad game. and I finished it in a minute and a half, not 4 hours.

lets hope

lets hope this does not get killed because a few help full advice to a bad game
1)im going to say it GRAPHICS yes you state your graphics are poor but still just throwing that out there.
2)the sound could be better.
3)you need more enemies and more screens.
4)you need to make him move faster
5)personal question,What is with the guy loseing his head after he falls?

all-in-all im going to go for a zero for now BUT, remake it improve it give it an actual story some more sound more upgrades then i will come back and rescore it. sd for potential for once i can't really say
3 stars for sound but -1 stars for the combination of all the bad things

my thoughts as a player= try again better luck next time
as a newgrounder= i don't care that this is your first piece Blamm this piece of crap
but yes i did take into account that this was you first but even then this pales to a FEW of some peoples first