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The first attempt

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flash animation I made decent (I think), of course, after many tests, and thousands of hours wasted.
sorry for my bad English
eddsworld drawing style.
Maybe finish the story
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animación flash que hice decente (creo), claro que despues de muchas pruebas, y miles de horas desperdiciadas.
perdón por mi mal inglés,
estilo de dibujo de eddsworld.
Tal vez termine la historia

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Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Seems like its too short, and this was lacking some color, you should add more to it more characters more scenes but most of all add some color from backrounds to the characters, it was just lacking in those areas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well color for one, and the loop was so short so add much more stuff going on scenes more story, and color

~~OVERALL~~
Too short

~X~

Alakamame responds:

I'm working on it

It isn't bad

It isn't bad at all.
Smooth animation
Add some audio and make it a tad longer, and you got a great vid :3

Alakamame responds:

Thank you very much to all for the commentaries, already I am improving it

LOLz

Its Nice but Make It A Liltle Longer

Smooth

The animation is very smooth, good job! I'd like to see this work finished, with sound and eventually color. Good job, keep up the good work!

Choppy

It has some smooth moments but the animation gets choppy every once in a while. It lack sound and color. However, for a first attempt this isn't bad. If you could make run a little smoother and add in all those things i mentioned you might have a decent piece of work there.

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Score
3.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 30, 2010
3:02 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
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