Too short
~~REVIEW~~
Seems like its too short, and this was lacking some color, you should add more to it more characters more scenes but most of all add some color from backrounds to the characters, it was just lacking in those areas
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well color for one, and the loop was so short so add much more stuff going on scenes more story, and color
~~OVERALL~~
Too short
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