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Its Nice but Make It A Liltle Longer
Reviews for "The first attempt"
It isn't bad
It isn't bad at all.
Smooth animation
Add some audio and make it a tad longer, and you got a great vid :3
Alakamame responds:
Thank you very much to all for the commentaries, already I am improving it
Smooth
The animation is very smooth, good job! I'd like to see this work finished, with sound and eventually color. Good job, keep up the good work!
wow! nice first flash!
gotta say for a first attempt its probably at the top end of animating of first flashes!
keep up the good work! add some sound and a preloader and itl be even better!
Too short
~~REVIEW~~
Seems like its too short, and this was lacking some color, you should add more to it more characters more scenes but most of all add some color from backrounds to the characters, it was just lacking in those areas
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well color for one, and the loop was so short so add much more stuff going on scenes more story, and color
~~OVERALL~~
Too short
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Alakamame responds:
I'm working on it