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The Head Of Millstonegame

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This is my very first flash game i ever made so i dont wanna know how basic it is okay

NOTE:this is still one of the first demos

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Okay Your Character is have a standing still animation but havent got walking and jumping animations.If you add them to game It can be better

Something already seen...

It is so similiar to a game i reviewed 2 days ago... "SquishyLikeBallAdventure?". There is a public platform game engine? :D
Not something bad, of course! I'm saying this for just one reason: i can't understand the meaning of a HP system in a platform game! I mean, platform games are perfect with a "lives system", such as the most famous platform games... When the character collides with an "enemy", it dies!!! Why giving him "many chances" with infinite lives if he falls down...?
Ok, lets talk about the rest.
Game's good, nice gfx and sound. But i would add a "music button" if someone wants to quit it. And, if possible, a Pause Button.
Make a Checkpoint System, because is soooo easy to miss some platforms...! :D
And check the level design... it can be more interesting! ;)

Yeah, nothing else to say. General idea is so good, fix the above "points" and it will be awesome! ;)

Okay, time for a review!

So, first the things I liked; the game looked pretty nice, the music fit well, and overall the game works pretty well.

Now some things that should be improved; the physics (jumping) is sort of weird, I think you should be able to jump higher. The spikes that move up and down work pretty well, but suck out too much life and it is hard to avoid them, either make them move higher so you have a better chance of dodging them or make them suck out less health.
The final problem that should be addressed; you should not have to click the button to go to the next level, you should be able to touch the oval at the end and automatically go to the next level.

I see promise in what you have done, keep it up.

turtle soup

The game glitches if you double-click on the portal to the second stage...


it's okay but there wasn't a lot that stood out i'm sure if you keep workin you'll get it though

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1.77 / 5.00

Mar 22, 2010
6:51 PM EDT