"There names only spoken of in tales..."
Really? Maybe it would pay to have someone else check your dialogue before submission! Or you could learn the correct usage of their, there, they're etc. Other wise the flash is not good or bad, but feels like it lacks direction in general.
We all lack general direction.
Gotta be honest...
I feel like I've seen this story a lot recently. Some form of ultimate power appears and it's up to heroes, from several dimensions, to save the day. The sprite animation is of low quality too. I hope it picks up in later episodes.
Off to a good start
It was great that you managed to get someone as experienced as GhoulRa to help you. It looks like it will take some time for the action to get started, as I did not really like this submission. The old man and Ronald McDonald raping was just so...random. The sprite work has definitley improved and it is great to see this series from the start so I can understand it more. The action was pretty good and I was definitley not expecting Mario to die. Of course, that would be a pretty realistic thing to show.
ho did you get your profile picture
Simple, just press Ctrl ALT + Del twice and there you have it!
very good but what is the song out side the bar?
It would be Vengaboys - We Like to Party.
Thanks for the 10, but a constructive review would've been a lot nicer!