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Just a little experement to see what you want so if you see the Commentary please leave some opinions so i can make a better one dont say graphics cause i suck at graphics
Dont know anyone in Real life thats good at graphics
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These moving spikes are impossible to dodge which makes the game unplayable!

Awesome!

I really liked it! It teminded me of a platformer game I made a while back.
You should fix the backround, maybe instead of the NG building you can put a valley with trees etc. Add some sound.

Good job. Practice to get better and better.

Finally I think this a great game for a beginner!

5/5 10/10

-MagicMichael66

It was good

it was good. but it was annoying that i couldnt get over the spikes without getting hurt.

Check Points! Plz?

Like I said, check points are a must. You have a good structure for a decent game. Graphics are not too bad. BUT, a story line would be good (you already had one going, but introduce it before the game play starts maybe? And instead of a training level, how about a "How To Play" page which explains everything, so that way there isn't so much in game text (it kinda bugged me). I have some other ideas to make it better... If you're interested, you can PM me, and I could even help you better it if you want?

NewAssasination11 responds:

there was a how to play in Help and you have a very helpful review so thank for the check point stuff

i think...

that this game has alot of potential, even though its a simple, and not even new concept, you can still add some more stuff, something that stands out from other platformer ball games out there. I really liked the quirky humour going on, and i hope u keep that kinda humour in ur future games/flashes. But good work anyhow on experimenting :D

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Jan 30, 2010
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