They fought many foes...
Like MOON PANTHERS!!!
This is just a summery of the 1st book of my webcomic yet to be. I took the basic fairy of the knight in shining armor saving the beautiful princess, and I really modified it. The actual story will be much more detailed, with dialogue and better images. This is the 1st flash story I have submitted to Newgrounds, so please excuse my lack of experience.
They fought many foes...
Like MOON PANTHERS!!!
Dya know what, this ain't bad, well done bro
a bit boring really if I'm honest.
Really good art.
If you are unlucky enough to click on corthon the first time you get to the map it takes you to the image of the black beast outside the castle and unfortunately the forward button makes you read the text again and resets all the steps you took on the map!
Will look out for the full thing
I don't want to see a webcomic
People go on newgrounds to see animation, not a slideshow. Also, I thought this might be a game when I clicked on it and it had the GAME SYMBOL by it. Sorry dude, I'm sure you may have worked hard on it, but the slideshow-ness, coupled with that scrolling text of boredom really makes this submission bad.
The music loop was annoying too.