actually not that bad

Seeing as how this is your first, it actually wasnt all that bad. horrible music, that i had to mute and kinda badly done. but the raw essence is there. i enjoyed the challenge of actually going through it and beating it. and also, an iidea for the future, try having more than one way to go, like an actualy maze.

joa

Obviously your first game... Nothing new, nothing motivating, nothing good-looking. 3/10 for the effort. You shouldn't post everything you make, exactly as drawers or painters do not post sketches.
there are too many very good programmers, there is simply no place for beginners with low skills... Sorry, but you should train youself and learn more. Then, one day, with a good idea, you can make an awesome game :)

Keep going!

Amateuristic

Horrible music that makes me want to kill myself, a concept we've seen a thousand times, dull and ugly graphics and worst of all uninteresting gameplay.

I'd call this amateuristic, but admittedly you're an amateur, so that's a given. Instead I'll say that this might be a nice start in a trial and error sort of flash career, but your biggest mistake here was uploading this. This is something you made to learn about the program. Until you advance a little bit further, I wouldn't bother posting it on newgrounds.

After that, by all means do. You might become a promising young artist yet.

umm

Too simple and you can cheat very easliy, could spend more time on backgrouds, colours, mouses e.t.c. good for a first game though.

Eh....

It's too easy to cheat.(left click and hold)