Um.... hey man...

Yeah, so you probably need to refine your craft a bit before posting more. Seriously, this is one of the worst vids i've seen.

As a friend, save yourself some harassment and take a few months to learn how to become better.

Also, edits shouldn't be overused like that, you make yourself seem kinda needy.

Brilliant and Ironic

I bow to your excellent wit as you present us with a movie about submitting a poorly done animation to the portal THROUGH a poorly animated submission to the portal.

That takes some balls my friend, and you have shown you got yourself a big ol' pair of brass orbs.

Well done sir!

BACK THE F*CK OFF!

I swear, why does everyone bash this guy? This may be a slightly (or maybe more) crappy video, but still, the guy took the time to make something and it got hits and even the front page on Newgrounds! Come on, stop bashing him and just congratualte him. I give this 5/5 and 10/10, but, in all fairness, it really shouldn't get that. Still, good job dude.

RIght....so....

i dont need to say it was bad, do i?
i actually gave it a 1 while it was still under judgment....happy for you it made frontpage though. But we both know it isnt really frontpageworthy, now dont we?
Don't rant about stress, if this gives u stress, how bad would the other flash artists be stressing? Don't mind me though, i'm not a flash artist, who knowz, i might stress my arse off too...(why'd u stress anyway, a deadline perhaps?)

It might not be thàt bad, its just not right that its on the frontpage now. And with 600 of 616 people saying its a bad clip, u might just try believing it IZ a bad clip, without excuses. U might want to get anti-stresspills for when ull make ur next flash, it might turn out better than.

And i seriously hope u Will take anti-stresspills if that makes u animate better..

I'll just leave it to that. thank u for reading and voting this review useless.

Ow, and ill give u a 4, since as said, it wasnt thàt bad. You just need ur pills.

I say

While I think the animation could have beena bit more smother, I understand where you are coming from, animation is hard to do and getting everything to look good AND move is just... well its diffictult, but it would be more enjoyable to have some more sound effects or at least a small tune as backround music. But besides that the movie, while short was very nicely done for someone I haven't seen on here before, good luck to making more movies in the future.