Crude, but Accurate... Oddly Enough
You make me inspired to submit something... anything... and not in a good way, either.
This thing is crude... literally. It could use some spitfire polish, or sound effects, or a script. A series of stills with no dialogue, except one poorly mixed voice-over, make for a disenchanting romp.
On the other hand, you did encapsulate the Newgrounds experience. It looks more like the storyboard for an animation that someone with greater aesthetic polish would likely remaster. Nobody here will argue that some people get enraptured by the faux glamorous fun experienced at this site as to strive to become part of it, only to be scoffed at and have their computer crash under Flash's weight. It's not easy being a flash author.
Still, this animation gives hope (in an ironic, tongue-in-cheek fashion) to people who are hesitant to submit material, fearing it might get chewed out. But this doesn't immunize this Flash from how poor it is; its reception on YouTube will likely be as icy as it is here.
On the other hand, it isn't bad like "OMGUSUXX" bad. It's the mark of someone who isn't afraid to showcase what he has. In other words, don't knock it completely folks. As crude as it is, it reflects upon a typical Newgrounds experience. Keep practicing daily and you might just have a breakthrough. (That goes for everybody here!)