WORK ON YOUR VOICE ACTING.
JESUS, no offense dude, but you sound like those bored kids in english class, reading with no emphasis and without any idea how to pronounce complicated sounds.
Okay, maybe not THAT bad, but still, put some emphasis and "oomph!" in your words. CARE, dammit! :P
Okay, I'm done ranting. Good otherwise. :P
hmm not that bad, in fact i kinda like it. It's just a little short tho..
Get an actor!
Could be cool, if you had someone voice acting instead of reading a short story in monotone. Other than that, neat.
im sorry i found it funny that te guy would sit in a dark alley way when zombies are roaming around.... i would run my ass into a building and block every door... more like a grocery store.... n e ways that was a pretty good flash, and that kid with the gums all torn..... that was pretty cool too... usually someone would put a skeleton with little flesh on them....... gj! keep it up
it wasnt much of a preview, it just looked like the beggining of a movie, less like an advertisement. and you still need some work on flash skills. your drawings have always been your strongpoint, but you need some work in other areas, like movie clips and other loops. email me at email@example.com, firstname.lastname@example.org, or IM me on aim: xMaskedxOutcastx for some help. you have alot of potential, and i'd like to see it put it to use.