Good...but...
WORK ON YOUR VOICE ACTING.
JESUS, no offense dude, but you sound like those bored kids in english class, reading with no emphasis and without any idea how to pronounce complicated sounds.
Okay, maybe not THAT bad, but still, put some emphasis and "oomph!" in your words. CARE, dammit! :P
Okay, I'm done ranting. Good otherwise. :P