too poor
got no animations, picture in low quality, no music, and the writings or the subtitle doesnt make any story . boooo
Please give me some feedback.This is my first ever flash, so please be nice =)
too poor
got no animations, picture in low quality, no music, and the writings or the subtitle doesnt make any story . boooo
Nice Artwork
You have some wonderfully drawn characters and scenery. I was honestly expecting stick figures, as is the case for most first uploads. This is pretty and I like it. I'm hard pressed to believe this is really your first, but if it is awesome and I hope to see more of you on NG.
Err, for suggestions.... I suppose you should work on animation instead of still shots. However, if animation isn't your thing, I suspect you have a future in the art portal.
Thanks for the upload.
Merry Christmas to you as well. =)
Interesting...
I'm not really sure what this was about, but from what I can tell it seems like a Christmas poem. Although I admit its cute, this seems more like a digital picture book or slide show. Did you make the artwork yourself? For some reason I feel as though I've seen it somwhere before, but since I have no real grounds to go on, I won't deduct points for that.
Anyway, its ok, and maybe you could include a bit more of a explanation about your movie in the comments next time.
Merry Christmas.
Its my first try =).
I only made it like this because it was my first try and i dont know how to move parts etc...Thats my next step =).
Thanks to everyone who commented on my flash...I know its kinda poor but i guess i did do a really good job with my 1st ever flash things =)
It's not my thing
It's not really what I like, but it's cute. I would say that it's more of a movie than a game and may fit in more appropriately there.