hmmmm
~~REVIEW~~
hmmm well it was just an intro, could use more content and some animation besides just the intro but its your first flash so its ok
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more then just the intro
~~OVERALL~~
just an intro
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Author Comments
this is serious, i never worked in flash before, and i want something cool for my intro to my porfolio site.
i could use some advise on how to make it better
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People here don't really like animations posted only to lead them onto your site. But since this is your first submission, you might be forgiven.
Well
To be honest man, its a good try, way better then what i could do cnsidering i dont make flash,
But think like a person that would visit ur site.... would u want to sit there and watch something countdown to nothing and then switch to ur site?
Maybe if ya added some things like examples of ur stuff or music or something to it... i dont know, but personally i would end up skipping it because it only counts down
But, its good nonetheless, its synced up well, and it has good speed, just make it more fascinating for the eyes :)
It didn't work..
I don't know why, or how. It loads, or I skip the intro, which ever. Then I got 404'ed.
Until I see it. I have to give it a bad review since it didn't work.
Sorry Man.
Hmm..
Well for one its too slow for an intro to a site. Who wants to wait that long when it really wasn't that interesting. If thats the look you want then I would start it at 4 instead of 8. Just 4, 3, 2, fade in to the site or link page.