So, someone else thought of integrating a comic into Flash, eh?
I gave you 3/5, because I like comics, graphic novels, and the concept of integrating them into Flash for easy dispersal and viewing purposes.
However, I think the comic itself could use some work. Work on the speech bubbles to look a little nicer, and perhaps structure the frames better for a simpler flow.
But keep going! I look forward to an improved #2!