Just an edit of the last one.
Meh
It was good, but it wasn't really a 'game', more a movie. Your Replay button at the end took you to fin again, so no replaying it. The buttons should make the text, instead of scenes. Maybe you should add in some music.
5/10 because it was quite flawed.
yeah I know I need to fix stuff, and I should have the next button appear after the scene is done and other stuff like that, but this was kinda just a project I did over a the week for school.
Also I didn't know what to put it as so I kinda just put it under simulation-other.
thanks for the critique though.
and yeah i know that the replay button doesn't work, Im not sure how to make it go back to the title page.