Influenced by Pokémon flash. Gameplay gets repetitive way too soon and never ends. You should add instructions to the Author Comments.

Good game for sure

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I liked it. I really did. But, when none of my attacks did anything to even the weakest of critter, my attempts to flee were consistantly foiled, and my attempts to heal myself sadly inadequite, I decided that it would be best to stop while I still liked it. I will look for that second part when it comes out, for sure! :)

But I do agree with Animith about the instructions. I was a bit lost when I started. :(

its kinda a pokemon game but its better obviusly

NO.

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One thing this could have really really used was instructions. Although you kind of get the gameplay as you go along, having any amount of initial instructions would have been nice.
As well, a mute button. Mute buttons make your gameplayers very very happy, because sometimes no matter how awesome the music is they want to listen to their own stuff. And the music here, although nice, gets very repetitive quite fast. So mute button would be a simple and effective addition.

Superficials aside, I think you have the key elements of a game here, but it does need a fair bit of improvement. The strategy is very simple and manageable, but because it doesn't really evolve very far through the gave it gets quite repetitive. Just adding any kind of upgrades or different types of characters with strengths and weaknesses would have helped this a lot...or even a little more of a plotline? I guess that can come with a second part and the like, but as it is the gameplay and storyline left a little to be desired.

The drawings were okay, but perhaps could have used a little more detail or shading or just something extra to make them a little more artistic. In general, there's a lot of room to play around in to improve this, so it'll be interesting to see what comes with the second part.

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