yes, there is work put into this
at the moment im too tired to write a long review, but i can say that the poem is very welly written. i don't expect to see many more flashes from you, but I can see you do have a talent for writing
Author Comments
My first entry. I got some inspiration from I Know You and found some more works by the same guy. Its about a girl I like and I found the words express how I feel. Enjoy.
sometimes its the little things...
this movie had no flashy graphics, it had no percise sounds, it had no characters... all it had was words, and thats all that it needed... this poem is good dude, i write poetry all the time, and i'll write it until i finally run out of words to say, this was wonderful, i like it a lot, mainly because it is so different, it has heart, and thats all it needs, you did an awesome job, keep it up dude, this was great...
sweet
All you assholes who say this is crap, fuck you!! This guy only wants to show someone how much he cares about her! Let it be, it's a beautiful poem!
Ur sucking
Eat crap, boy.
it's not you're first movie ... YOU JUST SUCK !!!
wow that movie was very very beautiful ..
said my grandma ..
haha that movie suckt ass ...