Good Job Keep It Up

The Game idea is really good but make use of the ctrl and shift button instead of the up button as jump, the gets irritating, and the first jump on the 3rd level is near impossible it takes several attempts and very very very good timing to get across.

The stakes on the ground aren't a challenge they're annoying, and the invincibility time after getting hit should be slightly longer. I think instead of turning transparent the character should fly back or else you'll just repeatedly take damage. In Level 6 I think those flashing platform should be visible slightly longer because again it takes lots of timing to get it right.

There should also be help signs around the place other wise you don't know what the hell the other guy is doing there.

Overall the gameplay is o...k the music is engaging you just have to start working on the details.

A fine job Scorp!

Tekno's Opinion

I agree with Chris, the controls are a little bit awkward and in platformers like this, it should be more smooth. It's way complicated to not to fall to certain death because of the so precise jumping you have to do.
The rest is fine, the graphics are correct, the sound is proper and it's pretty long. If it wasn't for the nerv-breaking controls, it would be a great game :)

Good start.

Might I suggest shrinking the gaps and making the obstacles a little easier at least for the first few levels. I got to about level 5 before I found myself totally frustrated, mostly from having to go to the very edge of one platform to make the jump to the next. Forcing me to either tip-toe up or wing it and risk plummeting to my death and having to start the level over. Unless thats the kind of thing you were goin' for.

Good.

Good start, But the levels start to get impossible at level 3, Nice learning curve.