its "okay" for your first try
dw you'll get there
Author Comments
Hellos.
This is my first ever flash game. Created by me and my classmates. Please do not expect much, in terms of storyline and game content. Sometimes the sound fx doesn't work, I don't know why TT anyways enjoy!
p.s. try to figure out the story behind. if you have questions, feel free to ask:D ty for taking time to play this game.
I feel that it is not good enough. Gomen. working on an animation now. hope it will b better
decent
it was good for a first try the animation as you said could be better but some decent game play and i didn't like how you used the paint lines on the walls
Hmmm
Despite the terrible animation, a somewhat playable game. One thing though, is it supposed to be impossible to finish?
reiipanda responds:
nope. if u'd pieced up the clues together, u'd realise that u have to go to the living room and click on sth. Sorry for the terrible animation.
A good first attempt
This is a really good job if this really is your first flash game. The graphics are quite colorful, and sometimes very good and the story had alot of potential. That being said, i have a few critiques.
Number one is the sound, having some sound effects for some things but for other actions is kindof annoying.
2nd would have to be the graphics. Some of the art is quite nice, especially the dolls and some of the assorted items around the rooms. However, just as many items have rather poor artwork, and when i can SEE that you used the paintbrush tool to "spatter" colors on the screen, something's wrong. For a better effect try using the spraypaint tool and using a few different colors on top of one another (like different shades of red for blood)
3rd is probably pacing. Some cut scenes seem to drag on, while some important story related cutscenes are so short that they lose all their emphasis. If this is indeed supposed to be a horrorish game, then atmosphere is key, and pacing can add alot of tension to most anything.
Also related is how the story was treated. The game was too short, and went by too quick for the story to really affect the player. Again, pacing would help with this, and maybe a few more cut scenes.
Other than that, the only real problem i had was with the mother's movement in the house. I'm not really that good with flash, so i can sympathize with the difficulty in making things take a certain path, but honestly i don't think she even needed to be there.
This might get blammed, even though it is quite a bit better than the usual crap that floats through here. You and your classmates should defiantly remake this game. Maybe get whoever drew the dolls to do all the art? Or maybe they were just rushed for the rest of it. Add some sound effects and maybe some music. Work with the pacing and atmosphere, and this could be a pretty solid entry
Horrible mechanics
The mechanics of this game is horrible. It seems interesting, but in my opinion, not good enough to post on Newgrounds. Nice try though.