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I still got a long way to go, but I want to know how to improve this

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not a scene creator

Ahh gewd so far.

Well it's a goos start, but as you probably already know, it is far from complete.
What you already have is very good, the colors don't run off, and it looks realistic, but you need more choices.
At least 5 for each option Minimum.
I like the way you did the double colors, especially on the hair.
Also, i think their should be like....a choice of some..emo-ish gothy rock song to choose from.. Or something.
And a different background,, the reflects the scene-esk feeling, not this blah green that makes one want to scroll down really fast.
It's a good start.
Message me when you have the next one.
If it continues this way, it will be very good.
Dont let me down =]

needs work big time

Im just gonna say this needs a major overhaul

"Not good"

Sorry but I have to say 1/2 of the buttons dont work, its not even good for a first time flasher, You need pratice before you put a flash game ontoo new grounds. so try harder next time
2/10

Try uploading this to the alphas section

Lookin good, but it's pretty broken my friend. Maybe you should remove it and upload it to the alpha's section. The people there may have actual useful tips on how to fix it, or get what you want done done. Here's what I saw though:

Good:
-all the colour selections work
-art style looking good
-the leggings selection buttons (1 and 2) work

Bad:
-the "Hair," "Face," "Body," and "Shoes" selection buttons don't work
-none of the "None" buttons work

I hope you get the fixes you want, and get this back on the portal. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

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2/5

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Uploaded
Sep 12, 2009
5:28 PM EDT
Genre
Gadgets - Dress Up
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