Why?

Why do these videos get such high reviews? x

lol Thanks :)

For using my music in something. It's getting me a little more known each day!

Although the effort is below average. Try better next time :D

Not too detailed

I didn't really understand what exactly you did when you drew the body. More explanations would be nice here. Also, a short clip of a body being drawn could help as well.

The steps for the body parts where more detailed, but still short clips would help more than just the drawing steps.

Also, the navigation only has the most basic part, a forward button. I cannot go back; if I want to see a previous step again I have to start over the whole flash.
A little menue where I can jump to certain steps would also be a good idea.

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Not very detailed

I think that when you've shown these steps, you've not been very detailed - you can achieve much more of an effect by using a smaller drawing tool and zooming in. This will give you a more detailed image, with less clutter - the black lines don't interfere with each other, causing the image to look blotted and ill-drawn.

With the drawing of the body parts, would you not be able to draw a movie of the piece being drawn, rather than a step by step placement of the lines like importing girders for a steel frame.

Practising with the drawing style will give you a much better output - you don't need to draw chest muscle structure in a figure until you come to the detail part if they are going to be wearing a T-Shirt. That's one of the major failings - you do too much more work than you need to do, in order to produce the piece. Working on that will give you a much improved product to show the uninitiated.

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There are plenty more, better alternatives.

Art/Animation: 3/10
Well, if you're doing a tutorial, you should really be able to ull off whatever you're trying to do well. You can't. You need to seriously work on your own art before you go telling other people how to do it. The writing was pretty sloppy too. Maybe a font would have worked better.

Plot/Concept: 2/10
Not a horrible idea, but this has been done across the internet by people much more talented than you, so this tutorial is pretty much pointless. Also, try to spell things correctly next time. At the end, it says "Hope it heped". That instantly lowers the quality.

Audio/Music: 7/10
The music was quite nice, nothing really wrong with it, but unfortunately, it didn't do enough to redeem this flash.

Overall: 3/10
You need to know how to do something before you make a tutorial about it. This didn't cut it.

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